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12 Proven Email Subject Line Formulas That Get Your Emails Opened

October 21, 20244 min read

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Ever sent an email campaign only to watch your open rates fall flat? You're not alone. As a copywriter I've learned that your subject line isn't just a first impression - it's your only chance to get that all-important click!

Why Most Subject Lines Fail

Let's be honest, most inboxes nowadays are battlefields. Your carefully crafted email is competing with hundreds of others. However, there is good news. I'm about to share my tried-and-tested formulas that consistently achieve 30%+ open rates.

The Psychology Behind High-Performing Subject Lines

Before we dive into formulas, let's understand what makes people ‘click’:

  • Curiosity (but not clickbait)

  • Personal relevance

  • Timeliness

  • Value proposition

  • Fear of missing out (used thoughtfully)

12 Subject Line Formulas That Work 

1. The Curiosity Gap

Formula: [Intriguing Statement] + [Promise of Resolution]

Examples

  • This 'mistake' doubled our conversions...

  • The weird productivity hack our CEO swears by...

Why it works: It creates an information gap that can only be filled by opening the email

2. The Ultra-Specific

Formula: [Number] + [Specific Outcome] + [Timeframe]

Examples

  • 3 Marketing Tweaks That Saved Us £1,000 last month

  • 7 Morning Habits London CEOs Swear By

Why it works: It offers clear, measurable value and sets realistic expectations

3. The Question Hook

Formula: [Relevant Question] + [Hint at Solution]

Examples

  • Are your email open rates declining? Here's why

  • Struggling with work-life balance? This helped me

Why it works: Asking questions engages the brain and they prompt curiosity about the answer

4. The Social Proof Play

Formula: [Credible Number/Name] + [Desirable Outcome]

Examples

  • How 1,000+ UK Businesses Are Beating The Recession

  • What Marks & Spencer Learned About Customer Loyalty

Why it works: These leverage the power of social proof and credibility

5. The Time-Sensitive Motivator

Formula: [Timeframe] + [Benefit/Opportunity]

Examples

  • Only 24 hours left: Your marketing audit awaits

  • Quick update about tomorrow's price change

Why it works: These create a sense of urgency without feeling pushy

6. The Personal Touch

Formula: [Personal Element] + [Valuable Insight]

Examples

  • James, I noticed something about your website

  • My biggest marketing mistake (and what I learned)

Why it works: Feels like a one-to-one conversation rather than a mass email

7. The How-To Hook

Formula: How to [Achieve Desired Outcome] without [Common Pain Point]

Examples

  • How To Increase Sales Without Spending More on Ads

  • How To Write Better Emails Without Hiring A Copywriter

Why it works: These promise a solution while acknowledging common challenges

8. The List Appeal

Formula: [Number] + [Desirable Things] + [Benefit]

Examples

  • 5 simple tweaks that boosted our email opens

  • 8 subject line mistakes most marketers make

Why it works: These set clear expectations and promises organised, digestible content

9. The Insider Edge

Formula: [Exclusive Info] + [Benefit]

Examples

  • Behind the scenes ~ Our content strategy revealed

  • Internal memo ~ Changes coming to Instagram

Why it works: Makes readers feel like they're getting special/privileged information

10. The Problem Solver

Formula: [Common Problem] + [Hint at Solution]

Examples

  • Tired of Low Conversion Rates? Try This

  • Your Unsubscribe Rate Might Be Telling You Something

Why it works: Directly addresses the pain points your audience experiences

11. The Direct Approach

Formula: [Clear Value Proposition]

Examples

  • Your October marketing checklist is ready

  • New case study: How we doubled email engagement

Why it works: Sometimes simply, clarity beats cleverness

12. The Pattern Interrupt

Formula: [Unexpected Statement] + [Relevant Tie-in]

Examples:

  • This email won't make you millions...

  • Don't buy our new course (until you read this)

Why it works: By breaking expected patterns your subject line stands out

Testing Your Subject Lines

Remember, what works for one audience might not be so successful with another. So, always:

  • Test different formulas

  • Track open rates by your market segment

  • Note which formulas work best for specific types of content

  • Consider your posting timing and context

The Golden Rules of Subject Lines

  1. Keep it under 50 characters when possible

  2. Avoid spam trigger words

  3. Write for your specific audience

  4. Test on mobile devices

  5. Always, always deliver on your subject line's promise

Next Steps

Choose three formulas from above that resonate with your brand voice and start testing them in your next email campaign. Remember to track your results and then adjust accordingly.

Need help crafting the perfect subject line? Contact us if you want to chat about your email marketing strategy.

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